Movie Scene(Outline); Invisible Ink (Tool of trust)
There was a boy named......He was preparing for exam(Nervously looking books)......His father gave him a kind of Ink which was invisible to write.....Before exams father whispered something in boy's ear..... After coming back from exam, the boy was extremely happy and blissful.....It is still a mystery for others that what happened.....Only father knows that it was only strategy to make a boy motivated by the name of invisible Ink.....
Rising incident has mentioned in the story, connection can be seen in the events and character could be given a name. Take care of capitalization errors.
ReplyDeleteYes you wrote wonderful. You explained very well help example.
ReplyDeleteThere is only capitalization mistake which you can remove it....
You wrote outline in sequence very well that tells the story clearly what is about and I did not see any mistake except capitalization as ma'am shared already. Good jod!
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